The Pitch
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1l9i397TX7HeSsuW2yA4OicfeZdIm7Xx7
Reflection on Feedback
Something that someone commented on was that they could tell how passionate I was on my idea. Thus, I knew that it was important to keep that the same, and really translate that again in this pitch. Another piece of helpful advice was how I could provide more information describing the product, and explaining how it differs from what is currently on the market.
What I Changed
In this elevator pitch, I tried to make my concept of the product more visual by using more descriptive words. I also explained what is currently on the market, and how it does not fulfill the need as well as my product does. I definitely felt even more confident in this pitch than the last one.
Perla, you did a really good job on your elevator pitch. It was evident that you are passionate about this product and are dedicated to finding out as much information as you can on your target market. You looked very comfortable talking about your product and seemed like you have done a lot of research on those who have this problem.
ReplyDeleteHi Perla! I thought you did a really good job with this elevator pitch! You stayed focused and had me engaged the entire time and I like how you were able to make the corrections to your pitch from the feedback from last time and incorporate them into your pitch seamlessly. You seemed very calm the entire time and gave your pitch in a seemingly very organized manner. Great job!
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